tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5018416844606858663.post7086948521566675730..comments2013-09-16T12:51:23.381-07:00Comments on Creative Writing Workshop: SylvariTarahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17462887239482375830noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5018416844606858663.post-53436989397943928722013-02-26T17:21:35.835-07:002013-02-26T17:21:35.835-07:00I edited a few things that I didn't like after...I edited a few things that I didn't like after you read it. But this is one of my favorite prompts! and I had a lot of fun writing it. I was playing right before I got on to read the prompt again and I thought it would be a good subject for this poem. <br />JessiHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08312972710769360024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5018416844606858663.post-65038034172193675022013-02-26T15:50:40.630-07:002013-02-26T15:50:40.630-07:00This is an awesome visual poem! Thanks for posting...This is an awesome visual poem! Thanks for posting this today :) I like how your speaker really embodies the quiet observation of a Sylvari in a plant-dream-like world. It's neat also, because your poem very much so ties into the prompt that I recently added: Who is your speaker, and where is your world? <br /><br />From a personal standpoint, I tend to lean towards this natural kind of character-creation (especially in MMO's) because this kind of perspective stems from an organic and surrealistic perspective. Your poem is very well organized in its small stanzas/ "couplets." The last couplet is very conclusive in a unique way since it opens up the poem to new possibilities that range from outside of these last few lines: "Awakening into what was once was only dream,/a new life begins."<br /><br />I think color plays an important role in the poem, and of course, organic structure. Thanks for sharing and I hope to see you guys soon for workshop! (And also looking forward to GW!)<br /><br />-TaraTarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17462887239482375830noreply@blogger.com